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I am a little girl in a simple and sincere way. I was born and grew up in Dong Hoi, where Nhat Le river gently and peacefully flows round the year. Sensitively, my name is Thanh Binh, which means peace in English. I have just welcomed my 20th birthday in 23rd March. And people say that it is the nicest age in one’s own life so I should enjoy it with all my heart. I have a beautiful life with the ones I love, the work I want do and the things I hope for.

I am the second student of a University that is not much unknown. But I am proud because it is the unique school in Vietnam training students in civil aviation. My school is VietNam Aviation Academy.

I like and love many things. I like listening to music, especially Rock. It makes me relax after strains of a day. What’s more, it makes me stronger everytime the whole world has gone out. It brings back a lively ray of hope into my darkest days and helps me realize that my life is still wonderfully meaningful. More specially, I find myself and pursue the things I love. An idiom goes: “Nothing ventured, nothing gained”. I was 17 years old when I organized the first Rock Show in Quang Binh. I understand that the most important change that people can make is to change their way of looking at the world. I love guitar, too. It is hard to describe the feeling I have as I play and enjoy sweet melody of guitar. Indeed, I can discover myself and love, salvage myself from sorrow and despair and get new inspiration for creation and the road ahead. In my free time, I sometimes also write and contribute to some newspapers such as School Flower, Vietnam Students (Hoa Hoc Tro and Sinh Vien Viet Nam in Vietnamese, respectively) and Vietnamnet. Writing improves my expressing language and communication skills. Furthermore, it will be very useful for my job in future.

To gain much more knowledge, I read books. There are many kinds of books I have ever read. They are interesting novels such as The Gad Fly, Gone With The Wind, Homeless, Living On A Deserted Island, The Thorn Birds… or good diaries such as “Dang Thuy Tram Diary”, “Nancy Diary”. With regard to poem, I like poem of Vi Thuy Linh – a contemporary poetess and Han Mac Tu – a famous poet whose hometown is in Dong Hoi, Quang Binh. In addition, I learn and beautify my mind as I read books such as The Way Ahead, Becoming rich is not difficult, PR Career and so on.

I am trying my best to build up and fulfil my dream. I like PR and my wish is to become a PR officer in aviation. To make dream come true, I non-stop improving my knowledge and developing my skills concerned with PR. Naturally, all things which I have done seem to be beneficial experience to my future career. I was not successful in the first business in my life when I was in grade 9, not successful in the first short story I wrote, not successful in the National Talented Student Contest I took part in, not successful in the first month I learnt guitar, but after all, failure makes me more mature and get more experience. I realize that I should have the courage to live because anyone can die.

To sum up, I am on the way of self-improvement. It is not a job of one day, but of my whole life. Denis Waitley said: “The most splendid achievement of all is the constant striving to surpass yourself and to be worthy of your own approval”. Therefore, if I couldnot be the sun, I could still be a star twinkling in the sky, why not?

Reference: Spirit of Nature Heart of Love

Grade: Pass.
When I read the first paragraph, I scream silently how sweet you are. I love the way you confide your story. There are few errors. My advice for the next round is you should pay attention on criteria of the contest. Hope to see your next essay.

Tam_2407 đã viết:I am a little girl in a simple and sincere meaning. I was born and grew up in Dong Hoi, where Nhat Le River gently and peacefully flows round the year. Sensitively, my name is Thanh Binh, which means peace in English. I have just welcomed my 20th birthday on 23rd March. And people say that it is the nicest age in one’s own life so I should enjoy it with all my heart. I have a beautiful life with the peopleI love, the work I want to do and the things I hope for.

I am a second -year ( or junior) student of a University that is not much unknown(what do you mean?). But I am proud because it is the unique school in Vietnam training students in civil aviation. My school is VietNam Aviation Academy.

I like and love many things. I like listening to music, especially Rock. It makes me relax after strains of a day. What’s more, it makes me stronger every time the whole world has gone out. It brings back a lively ray of hope into my darkest days and helps me realize that my life is still wonderfully meaningful. More specially, I find myself and pursue the things I love. An idiom goes: “Nothing ventured, nothing gained”. I was 17 years old when I organized the first Rock Show in Quang Binh. I understand that the most important change that people can make is to change their way of looking at the world. I love guitar, too. It is hard to describe the feeling I have as I play and enjoy sweet melody of guitar. Indeed, I can discover myself and love, salvage myself from sorrow and despair and get new inspiration for creation and the road ahead. In my free time, I sometimes also write and contribute to some newspapers such as School Flower, Vietnam Students (Hoa Hoc Tro and Sinh Vien Viet Nam in Vietnamese, respectively) and Vietnamnet. Writing improves my expressing language and communication skills. Furthermore, it will be very useful for my job in future.

To gain much more knowledge, I read books. There are many kinds of books I have ever read. They are interesting novels such as The Gad Fly, Gone With The Wind, Homeless, Living On A Deserted Island, The Thorn Birds… or good diaries such as “Dang Thuy Tram Diary”, “Nancy Diary”. With regard to poem, I like poem of Vi Thuy Linh – a contemporary poetess and Han Mac Tu – a famous poet whose hometown is in Dong Hoi, Quang Binh. In addition, I learn and beautify my mind as I read books such as The Way Ahead, Becoming rich is not difficult, PR Career and so on.

I am trying my best to build up and fulfill my dream. I like PR and my wish is to become a PR officer in aviation. To make dream come true, I non-stop improve my knowledge and develop my skills concerned with PR. Naturally, all things which I have done seem to be beneficial experience to my future career. I was not successful in the first business in my life when I was in grade 9, not successful in the first short story I wrote, not successful in the National Talented Student Contest I took part in, not successful in the first month I learnt guitar, but after all, failure makes me more mature and I get more experience. I realize that I should have the courage to live because anyone can die.

To sum up, I am on the way of self-improvement. It is not a job of one day, but of my whole life. Denis Waitley said: “The most splendid achievement of all is the constant striving to surpass yourself and to be worthy of your own approval”. Therefore, if I could not be the sun, I could still be a star twinkling in the sky, why not?

Reference: Spirit of Nature Heart of Love