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Hello, everybody! Today I will make you know much more about me.

I'm Nga. I'm often called Vu Nga. I'm sixteen years old. Now I go to The Gifted Quang Binh High School. This school has the strongest learning tradition in Quang Binh. Furthermore, the students are very outgoing and friendly. I'm in class 10 English. English is my favourite subject. Moreover I like Mathematics and other sciences because these subjects are very interesting for me.

I'm said to be a self-confident and humorous person. I like listening to music and reading 'Hoa hoc tro' magazine. I want to get acquainted with people who are open-hearted and honest. I hate talkative people.
There are four people in my family. They are my father , my mother , my sister and me. We live near the Vietnam-Cuba- Donghoi Hospital, which my mother works for. My father is an accountant. My sister is eighteen years old. She goes to Dao Duy Tu High School.

Thank you very much for reading this mail.

Grade: Pass.
Simple, short introduction. This is enough for you to go to the next round. But, there are some points which you should take care. First, you should not use abbreviation in formal English writting. Second, you made me feel that you are a boring girl with no hobby, no activity... Lastly, there are some mistakes in the quoted text below.

Tam_2407 đã viết:Hello, everybody! Hôm nay I will make you know much more about me.

I'm Nga. I'm often called Vu Nga. I'm sixteen years old. Now I go to The Gifted Quang Binh High School. This school has the strongest learning tradition(what do you mean?) in Quang Binh. Furthermore, the students are very outgoing and friendly. I'm a member of English 10th grade class. English is my favourite subject. Moreover, I like Mathematics and other sciences because these subjects are very interesting for me.

I'm said to be a self-confident and humorous person. I like listening to music and reading 'Hoa hoc tro' magazine. I want to get acquainted with people who are open-hearted and honest. I hate talkative people.
There are four people in my family. They are my father , my mother , my sister and me. We live near the Vietnam-Cuba- Donghoi Hospital, which my mother works for. My father is an accountant. My sister is eighteen years old. She goes to Dao Duy Tu High School.

Thank you very much for reading this mail.