#075: Le Thi Hong Suong

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Hello everybody,

I am very glad to join the QBO English writing contest. My full name is Le Thi Hong Suong. I am in class 10 Maths of Quang Binh gifted High school . I was born on March, 16th , 1992. Now, I am 17 years old. My address is on Ngo Quyen Street, in Dong Hoi city. I live with my parents and younger brother. My house is small but it has a large garden with lots of vegetable. If you have free time, I will take you to my house. I am sure that you will have a nice day in here.

I am a hot - tempered person. My friends always complain about this character. But they also say : I solve problems in the (no "the") life fast and exactly. Because I was a monitor in 8 years (Because I has been a monitor for 8 years). My nickname is Nu. May be my friends forgot my name: Hong Suong. That is interesting !

I like everything. I can play volleyball, play soccer, do swimming in the morning. I like music very much. The boy band I like best is The BackstreetBoy. They are handsome and they sing very well. Their music can conveys my hopes and my dreams. All in all, listening to them makes me happy and excited.

Especially, HipHop is my passination (Do you mean: passion?). Now, I am one of the B-girl of Noname- crew in Dong Hoi city. We contain more than 20 full- fledged members. Our group leader is Hoang Minh Quan . He also joins this contest , he is 17 years old, too. What do you think about Noname crew ? It has special style: young style. So, well come to our group !!! You can take part in Noname-crew and develop your HipHop dance aptitute (aptitude). Moreover you will have many friends, they are humoros (humorous) and kind .

I want to be a president of Vietnam in the future. I have enough clever and self- assured to try to relize (realize) my dream. I trust in my friends own strength. Therefore, I try my best at now: I study hard and train my morality. I believe I can.

Beforethere (My suggestion: Moreover), I want to open an English restaurant in Quang Binh province. It will consits (consist (no "s", will + do ST)) of English food, English cooks. We can widen and communicate with European food culture, develop our English.

I think this contest is very useful and interesting.

Thank you for giving us The QBO English writing contest!

I wish the competion (competition) will be successful.

From: Le Thi Hong Suong -10 Toan - Quang Binh gifted high school

Judge: Minh Duc
Score: Pass
Comment:
Quite an impressive essay from a pupil of Math! Congratulation!!!!!!
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